What is English Tanka Poetry? – a Verse that consists of five units, usually in the following pattern of 5-7-5-7-7 which is syllables.
What is a syllable? a unit of pronunciation having one vowel sound, with or without surrounding consonants, forming the whole or a part of a word; for example, there are two syllables in water and three in inferno.
The first three lines (5/7/5) are the upper phase. This upper stage is where you create an image in your reader’s mind.
The last two lines (7/7) of a Tanka poem are called the lower phase. The final two lines should express the poet’s ideas about the image that was created in the three lines above.
Why I Write Tanka Poetry? Tanka poems is one type of poetry that I’m drawn to, I have written many in the last two years. Fortunately, I’m not in competition with other types of poetry, as I write many forms of poetry, plenty of sonnets, haiku/senryu or free verse, which I will be sharing in this blog.
Why Do I Write Tanka Poems? Learning how to write them well helped me to more aware of myself, and more aware of all the other styles of writing poetry.
Tanka also was a way for me to express thoughts of the world around me and present beautiful images in a tradition way through poems.
Three Tanka Poems
Primroses Everywhere
pretty small faces
peeping out amongst the noise
wind still blowing strong
still a welcome sight to see
giving me a smile today
The Sound of Water Falling
the water streaming
over cliffs cleaned by the force
the sound tremendous
internal peace took over
my body in a dazed state.
View of Goats
mountain ledge was steep
green bushes grew on the slopes
goats loved to folic
hope the sloops are not slippery
wouldn’t like to see them fall
#1 by Rachel McAlpine on November 17, 2018 - 8:50 am
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Glad to see you back in action! I relate to The Sound Of Water Falling, and love the shift of thought.
#2 by kiwinana on November 17, 2018 - 9:02 am
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Thanks, How do you find out I had a blog on Blogtown NZ? Have a peaceful weekend my friend.