Carpe Diem #1548 Orchids (ran) (Troiku
Chevrefeuille asks us to create a haiku, tanka or other kind of Japanese poetry themed orchids (ran)
My choice is the Troiku Poem
samourai warrior
enchanted by the beauty of orchids
bows his head in praise
© Chèvrefeuille
Orchid Troiku Poem
samourai warrior
main weapon, symbol, the sword
admires a orchid
enchanted by the beauty of orchids
with self discipline
touches it gently
bows his head in praise
then with meaningful action
gently picks it up
What is is Troiku Poem? Carpe Diem invented the Troiku, it is three haiku, with each of the three lines from a suggested haiku as the first line of each haiku in the troiku. It’s not always possible to have a 5-7-5 format in the second haiku, due to the limitations of the suggested haiku.
#1 by Kim M. Russell on November 20, 2018 - 9:00 pm
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Nicely done, Elsie!
#2 by kiwinana on November 21, 2018 - 7:45 am
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Thanks kim, all the best my friend.